Mother of Learning

Well written story, well designed, well implemented and no jarring suspension of disbelief issues

Also well edited which on an informal platform like this is far rarer a commodity than a good story

The only problems are inconsistent pacing (some portions go on and on describing minutia while other portions gloss over important scenes) and that some parts of the story are a slog (which might be intended, I'm sure they were a slog for the mc after all) 

A unique story that instantly ensares you with a unique magic system, and a mysterious loop, with the only lead being a dangerous tine traveler that might be under the control of a far more sinister force. In the first read through, the simple mystery leads you forward, always making you guess on what could be next. We watch as Zorian slowly becomes an Archmage, and discovers the secrets of the loop. Even after reading this book half a dozen times I still love it every singl time. It's characters are all unique, the magic system feels organic, and the loop is still amazing and fun.

Such an amazing story with crazy world building and relatable characters that have there own flaws and things to overcome. It was obvious from start to finish that the story was written with an end in mind and it helped with the continuity of the plot. Had no problems with grammar, maybe a typo here and there but unless your really nitpicking it's not an issue. Overall really enjoyed this story from start to finish and highly recommend diving in. 

My title showed itself, that's all you need to know. I first reading it on Fiction Press, & that's was one of my happiest day. This book has given me fantastical journey through the years. It will be long and wordy, and some of you might get bored. But bear with it till the end, and you'll find yourself one of the most beautiful gem.

This was the best fiction I have ever read in my whole life, thank you for making this book, I read it for many years, nowadays i am an adult but at time I was a teenager, and this book always reminds me of those times, so i appreciate your effort.

You don't find a lot of time travel stories here on RR. Here, this work is fairly unique. New. It's also well written. Every chapter delivers consistently. Easy 5.

I must have read this novel in under two weeks because this has been the most well written piece of literature I have ever set my eyes upon. Yes there are grammar mistakes and Zorion and Zach’s names are switched sometimes but this is a miracle and it deserves every bit of praise and appreciation it gets 

Great story! It may just be due to a lack of reading bestuseller.com novels, but i find it really good compared to other stuff i've read, such as the majority of translated Chinese novels.

Mother of learning, despite being fairly short for my standards is quite short, but i enjoyed the growth process and the development of the characters. Despite Zorian and Zach spending years in a time loop, they were able to stay sane, despite their changes they still retained their origial nature. Zorian stayed cautious, cowardly, Zach stayed rechless and brash, it was nice to see them not become some dull, omnipotent god

Loved the story read the entire thing throughout around a month and a half. Over the course of the novel you can also see the author improve on their writing skills which is a great thing to see because it makes you feel like the author is developing themselves over the course of story and not just the characters in them.

This story is a pretty fun romp through an original fantasy universe (with a heft dose of DnD inspiration).

Twists and turns aplenty, cool villains, interesting side characters, and I like the fact that our protagonist is the secondary hero of the story.

Can be a bit slow in places, and some of the visual descriptions are a bit sparse for my liking, but overall an enjoyable and competent story.