The Legend of William Oh

The Legend of William Oh

by Macronomicon

Original ONGOING LitRPG Dungeon Comedy Adventure
Warning This fiction contains:
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Listen here, because I've seen it with my very own eyes.

William Oh was born on the hundredth floor of The Tower, to the greatest Climbers of the ancient world, steeped in the Tower's lethal miasma from the moment he drew breath, giving him strange and unnatural powers.

They say he is an immortal being who circles the dreams of mortal men, resurfacing wherever the need is greatest. Those who disparage him will fall into despair, but if you're a Climber in a tight scrape, look to the sky and say a little prayer.

Maybe he will appear?

Odds are probably better if you pay for my drink.

- Rumor overheard on a 1st Floor Tavern. Originator did not pay his tab.

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Table of Contents
120 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: He who has no Class ago
Chapter 2: Life Goals ago
Chapter 3: Hype Man ago
Chapter 4: Escape Room ago
Chapter 5: Resourceful Climber ago
Chapter 6: Attrition ago
Chapter 7: Casualties ago
Chapter 8: Establishing Quest ago
Chapter 9: Spelunking ago
Chapter 10: First Impressions ago
Chapter 11: Fighting Retreat ago
Chapter 12: Kingly Repose ago
Chapter 13: Guy’s Shopping Trip ago
Chapter 14: Promote Synergy! ago
Chapter 15: Camel Abuse ago
Chapter 16: Ants on a Log ago
Chapter 17: Stoking The Fire ago
Chapter 18: Run boy Run ago
Chapter 19: 7th Time’s the Charm ago
Chapter 20: Rent-a-miracle ago
Chapter 21: No Refunds ago
Chapter 22: An Expert Opinion ago
Chapter 23: Ice Cave ago
Chapter 24: Fancy Meeting You Here ago
Chapter 25: Off-Build Relics ago
Chapter 26: Cling-ons ago
Chapter 27: Fame Attracts Crazy ago
Chapter 28: Why Baker Girls Specifically ago
Chapter 29: Boot Swap ago
Chapter 30: The Dead City ago
Chapter 31: Score of a Lifetime ago
Chapter 32: Leadership ago
Chapter 33: Splitting the Loot ago
Chapter 34: Thorns ago
Chapter 35: Don’t Forget The Kobold ago
Chapter 36: Fancy Inn ago
Chapter 37: Knowledge is Pain, Power, and Purpose ago
Chapter 38: The Immediate Plan ago
Chapter 39: Meet the Family ago
Chapter 40: Sparring ago
Chapter 41: Blue-fire Eyes ago
Chapter 42: Infiltrator and Saboteur go for a Walk ago
Chapter 43: Build Tweaking ago
Chapter 44: Floor 4 ago
Chapter 45: Ambush Ethics ago
Chapter 46: Three For the Price of One ago
Chapter 47: Chain of Command ago
Chapter 48: Grand…ish Strategy ago
Chapter 49: Herding Cats ago
Chapter 50: Do Your Thing ago
Chapter 51: Relic Theft ago
Chapter 52: build Theorizing ago
Chapter 53: the Enemy of my Enemy is a Distraction ago
Chapter 54: Akul, Metropolis of the 5th Floor ago
Chapter 55: Bureaucratic Bullshit ago
Chapter 56: Ear Collector ago
Chapter 57: One Trick Pony ago
Chapter 58: Cheaper by The Dozen ago
Chapter 59: Akul has Everything ago
Chapter 60: William (Not a necromancer) Oh ago
Chapter 61: New Loadout ago
Chapter 62: Would the Real Phantom Thief Please Stand Up? ago
Chapter 63: Patience ago
Chapter 64: Party Crashers ago
Chapter 65: Psychic Chain Lightning ago
Chapter 66: Boar Hunting ago
Chapter 67: Boar Hunting (pt. 2) ago
Chapter 68: Advice From The Baron ago
Chapter 69: A Missed Opportunity ago
Chapter 70: Round One ago
Chapter 71: A race is run in an alley before the first step is taken ago
Chapter 72: Round 2 ago
Chapter 73: Round Three ago
Chapter 74: Teaching Caution ago
Chapter 75: Nothing Personal ago
Chapter 76: Hypothetical Countermeasures ago
Chapter 77: New Blood ago
Chapter 78: ‘Fencing’ ago
Chapter 79: Prison Blues ago
Chapter 80: Kicking Things Off ago
Chapter 81: Dance with the Rotwitch ago
Chapter 82: Bakers United ago
Chapter 83: The Tournament’s Real Prize ago
Chapter 84: Spoils of War ago
Chapter 85: Spoils of War Pt. 2 ago
Chapter 86: 6th Floor ago
Chapter 87: That’s How You Get Crabs ago
Chapter 88: Selachimorpha Cloud Formation ago
Chapter 89: Gone Fishing ago
Chapter 90: Ocean Life ago
Chapter 91: Hold My Beer ago
Chapter 92: Cracked Immortal ago
Chapter 93: A night for romance ago
Chapter 94: Getting Crabs at The Brothel ago
Chapter 95: Any Boat in a Storm ago
Chapter 96: Gerrymandering ago
Chapter 97: Strategy Meeting ago
Chapter 98: Float On ago
Chapter 99: Dictum of Sweet Dreams ago
Chapter 100: Night Moves ago
Chapter 101: Scripted Defeat ago
Chapter 102: Interrogation ago
Chapter 103: Getting the Hang of it ago
Chapter 104: The Double Fakeout ago
Chapter 105: Level 30 ago
Chapter 106: Blitz ago
Chapter 107: Regroup ago
Chapter 108: Hunted ago
Chapter 109: Cat and Mouse ago
Chapter 110: Blessed Steel ago
Chapter 111: Love Letter From Holdna ago
Chapter 112: Seeing a Friend Off ago
Chapter 113: Re-equipping ago
Chapter 114: Dangerous as They Say ago
Chapter 115: Cheese Morale ago
Chapter 116: Prophet of the End ago
Chapter 117: Unearned Power ago
Chapter 118: (Not) A Natural Born Fighter ago
Chapter 119: Coiled Strike ago
Chapter 120: Tricked ago

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kirbylini
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Really like it, author uses too much noun/verb

Reviewed at: Chapter 5: Resourceful Climber

The magic system is slightly standard for litrpjg but it's done in a very unique way. I've never seen anyone use monsters as the source of human abilities and it's done really well.

I read about 20 chapters before I started to feel anxious and I couldn't figure out why. So I started dissecting each page and found the author is super focused on things and their movement. There were a few pages where that's all that was there; how the MC moved/used an ability and how the monster acted. I mean sure it was an action scene and you use those to describe action. But even between battles it's mostly what can the MC buy. So it's good at action, but there should be more color or feelings or IDK, something. 

I'll keep reading, but since it makes me feel kind of off to read too much I'll just do a few chapters at a time. 

Aigi
Overall

I love everything about this book. William Oh grew up in poverty. He has the highly developed senses of someone who grew up in a dangerous environment: hyper vigilance towards the body language and emotional states of others, and a very high emotional intelligence. He knows how to tell friend from foe, how to negotiate mutually beneficial arrangements with rivals, and how to do right by a person while still hedging against betrayal. His biggest weakness is his lack of education, but he's growing a polysyllabic vocabulary one word at a time. 

Another character of a different species confessed a one-sided crush on him recently. I myself am holding out hope that they'll find some sort of shape shifting equipment, to complicate the matter. 

Autobot5309
Overall

A wonderful balance of serious action and comedic genius, the perfect meld of clueless MC and brilliant protagonist. Reminds me a lot of Saitama in One Punch Man, but less punching and more tricks. I highly recommend to anyone who enjoys the comic above, op mc, and all things fun!

Greyfall1277
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Right. I'll start with the positives

1. The premise is very unique. I can safely say I've never seen such an interpretation of a tower climber fantasy. it also smoothly ties into the magic system which is actually fairly easy to understand. Its a big oart of the story and its done well enough that its fed slowly to the reader. at no point did I feel like explanations were slowing down the story and making it cumbersome. Again, really well done.

2. Characters are very well fleshed out and are so interesting. They also interact really well with the overall plot and the different motivations and goals feel very organic. The MC is a bit too smart and capable at times but not too much.

3. Good prose and grammar. Very easy to follow without the story suffering in quality. It's also consistently improved from chapter one to where I've reached so far.

4. I also like the pace. It ramps up a bit quicker than most but the author does well to keep us grounded. But I understand this is a preference thing, personally I hate "filler arcs". While this one doesn't have that I also have to acknowledge how much the author skips preparation moments or the moments in between the action.

 

Now the potential improvements. 

1. Some characters are too OP too quickly. but its actually not so bad. But It ties into the story well. like purposefully leaning into it. Some people might not like that. 60/40 ratio foe thos who want a hard scale on over poweredness hehe

2. The start needs some tweaking. Hard to follow in terms of new concepts being crammed into the reader too quickly. Compared to the rest of the story the start does a bit of a disservice for me.

3. Back to the OP aspect. I think more could be done to explain why or at least hint to it. But again, I don't think its bad. Just knowing there's a lot of people with hate boners for OP characters and the prejudice of anything that could hint at that.

 

Overall ever since I picked this up I haven't been able to put it down. Absolutely fantastic so far. Kudos to the author for this unique gem. 

Xox
Overall

Really Fun and pretty amusung

Reviewed at: Chapter 74: Teaching Caution

I am really enjoying this story and pretty much read it nonstop the past couple of days. My only wish is that there were more chapters out, since I just caught up. Bravo for the story and kudos to the author. There is lots of action, cool characters, and a nifty system, but it is the snippets and scraps revealed of the world building that truly has me intrigued.  Two thumbs up!

JeremyGHutchins
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Absolutely love William Oh.  Look forward to each chapter to see what random trouble Will gets himself into (and out of).  Super fun read.  I think out of all the books I follow on RR I end up re-reading this the most.  Very unique character and development that keeps it fresh and exciting each chapter.

Yungwes7
Overall

I don't have much to say aside from, this book is hilarious. I love the hype man, and the action is so good. William is an amazing character and the world is well done. I've still got questions, but 20 chapters in, I would expect to have some questions.

 

Nice job!

Ioneer
Overall

The main character is too op

Reviewed at: Chapter 23: Ice Cave

Im not sure how old the mc is but he doesn't act like the kid he is supposed to be(?)

The character work is pretty decent. I wish there would be more interaction between characters most of the characters disappear almost immediately.

Now the main thing I don't like. Things happen to easily to the main character. He is born with an item that everyone needs. His legend spreads like wildfire even though he doesn't do that much to justify it. He fights higher levels creatures no problem. It kinda cheapens the achievements. At least to my mind.

Humblyreading
Overall

I really enjoy everything Macronomicon puts out. He has a wide variety of genres within the litrpg umbrella and hits it out of the park everytime. This one is no different. Great take on the tower climbing genre with unique mechanics, great world building and a good balance of show don't tell, verses explainations of the system and world. 

It's funny, it's suspensfull, it is exciting and satisfying. It moves pretty quickly along with an entertaining story.

Gladis
Overall

Come on it's a story about William Oh the legendary! It's all-round great! I have been a fan of the Authors previous works and let me tell you this: This one so far tops all of them, it is just amazing in all aspects such as comedy, world-building, characterinteraction,  grammar and the works. (Not to demean the other stories I like them too, but in my personal opinion this one is just so good).